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  1. Lisa
    February 26, 2016 @ 11:32 pm

    Thank you all for your opinions I have learned a little bit of everything from each one of you. Which is what I wanted so that for my next idea I will use the advice in my future shots. There is a whole series photos with this photo,but this just so happened to be my favorite I live the image cropped as David showed and the idea and being able to know the story from the image itself really makes me think more into my goal and perfecting what I love the most thank you all !

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  2. Matthew
    January 21, 2017 @ 10:45 pm

    These critiques are amazing. Is this site still active? I’ve been searching for posts past February 2016 and haven’t found any.

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    • Aaron Draper
      March 28, 2018 @ 5:58 pm

      It IS. I have been on hiatus for a year due to teaching obligations. It’s back up now and it will be published once a week.

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  3. Carlos Torres
    April 29, 2018 @ 5:48 am

    Hello Lisa, right of the bat I get a creepy feeling but not dark. This is because of the wardrobe chosen where the creepiness stems from. Yet the warm tones and light in the image do not give me a dark feel altogether.

    From your submitted description I understood that you are trying out fine art photography and are looking forward to produce composites with an overall dark feel. With this information, the aspects of the image that do give me a dark feel would be the wardrobe, props and location. The wardrobe is helping your image feel dark in the sense where your make up is dark and the flowers along with the head piece look dull. Further more, I like how you brightened your dress allowing the viewer to focus on the subject.

    I understood that you are practicing to achieve images with a darker feel. Still I am left to question what the message of this specific composite is. It seems that you have a start which is a theme of “darker” composites that you want to pursue.

    Having said that, I can agree with Jason and say I do not quite receive a dark feel as well. The reason being is the overall warm tone, reduction of contrast and the light stemming in the background. To achieve a dark feel when editing this image I would think about intent and detail. In other words from your description you are intending to give of a dark feel, so you might consider cooler tones to convey a creepy feel. As far as detail, I can see how your wardrobe and location (aside from the time of day) was chosen; yet I am curious to why you chose to have a center composition. Something that could have improved your image without changing the composition would be moving closer to the camera creating a depth of field where your head piece and flowers have a clear separation and does not distract one another.

    If open to changing the composition in post, I would suggest taking Davids critique. I agree with his idea on cropping the frame because it reduces the distraction from the branches/trees can have on the head piece and flowers. Although you intentionally reduced contrast, I believe adding contrast may have helped as far as separating the subject from the background. Aaron provided an image of Brooke Shaden where contact was used by having a bright subject and darkening the location. Having said that I believe something that could have been beneficial and reduce time in post would have been shooting at a later time of day (or gloomy day) where the sun is not shining light on the background. This way you reduce the warm feel a forest can naturally give during daylight. If you want a centered composition, maybe trying a different location in the forest where the background does not compete with the subject or props may help.

    To recap, think about how cooler tones can be used to your advantage when trying to produce dark images. Experiment with composition and consider storyboarding to help figure out what does and does not work for you.

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